I wrote this because i’ve noticed a truth now forgotten. Love is not defined by one evening, but a life time of affection. The stars are not special because one sees them once, no, they are spun in the night sky every night, even in the storms, one knows the stars are still there.
“Ordinary Love”
June 13th, 2010
Three Friends down the road, Swimming
At the lake in the hot heat, throwing
A football while in water waist deep, smelling
Smoke of charcoal and barbeque.
My day off with nothing to do!
**
Now alone with skin hot from sun, napping
In the late afternoon, dreaming
So sweetly of my love, coming
Home soon.
**
Her smile is what I am dreaming of
That smile…
**
She has that everyday love-you-crazy smile, filling
Every corner of your heart, stirring
Every metaphysical fiber of your soul,
with that ordinary, monday through sunday,
found once in a lifetime
kind of love,
that words fail to define.
**
The paradox, union of eternity and every day.
Timeless, but not enough time
**
Love that brings contentment in the routine, making
Dinner every evening, talking
of about her day and what at the store she has seen, smiling
In a way I know she is staying,
**
I cannot help but smile
when she goes on her usual rattle, Complaining
of my muddy work boots still under the table, joking
about who wears the pants, listening
to all her crazy rants, dancing
In the kitchen after two glasses of wine,
(I pull her in close and we kiss, and then she smiles and laughs, and says I need to take out the trash!)
So beautifully mundane, that it transcends to the divine.
**
Ordinary love is what I am dreaming of….
**
Dusk casts rays of orange red yellow, chasing
The cool wind into the window, Changing
Into our comfy soft pajama’s.
We brush our teeth, getting
Ready for bed, Praying
Silently, thanking
The God above, kissing
Gently, holding sweetly,
My brown-eyed love!
.
.
-js
Well, I’ve been privelege enough to be nominated for this, and i’m accepting it, because I get to pass it on to one of the many poets who have inspired me.
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I would like to nominate D.S. Lear.
Here is a link to his blog: http://soundoffreedom.wordpress.com/
Here is a link to jingle week 22 perfect poet nominations: http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/11/thursday-poets-rally-week-22-the-perfect-poet-award/
June 13th, 2010 at 4:33 pm
perfect!
😉
June 13th, 2010 at 9:51 pm
thanks:]
June 13th, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Joe you have truly found what real love is. Your poem is perfect and beautiful. My husband and I have been marry 38 years, and we two found knew we had found true love.
June 13th, 2010 at 9:51 pm
aww thanks Viola, it makes me so happy to hear of a love lasting so long. 38 years! wow, that is remarkable and it shows this cynical world that love can work. the longer i live the more i realize how beautiful and special long lasting relationships are. I wish you many more years of happiness;]
June 13th, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Congratulations on your award.
June 13th, 2010 at 9:51 pm
thanks
June 14th, 2010 at 11:38 am
three poetry awards,
4 general awards…
Enjoy the moment.
Thank you for the contribution on poetry..
June 16th, 2010 at 4:46 am
Thanks jingle:]
June 14th, 2010 at 11:38 am
awesome nomination!
June 14th, 2010 at 3:14 pm
I have posted a new poem on my childhood.
http://billmanson.blogspot.com/2010/06/doing-girls-work-viola-jane-tabor.html
June 14th, 2010 at 4:03 pm
I am checking it out right now. (I will always read someone’s poem if they posted a link on my page)
June 14th, 2010 at 8:50 pm
welcome voting for awards of May..
your link is in, u get one automatically,
when you comment to vote, you get another vote for yourself as well…
thank you for the attention!
😉
June 16th, 2010 at 1:01 am
You’ve managed with these words to do what my husband finds impossible..I’m speechless this is beyond ordinarily beautiful. Your words capture pure love wholly divine.
And thanks so much for the recognition! I am honored as well as humbled by your kindness!
June 17th, 2010 at 4:23 am
I’m glad my words impacted you. Your compliment means a lot to me. thank you.
June 16th, 2010 at 3:35 am
i truly love your writing. such honest, simple, beautiful words… i can’t help but feeling growing hope, and smiling.
thanx for making me smile!
June 17th, 2010 at 4:28 am
thanks ya kindly, i hope i can keep making you smile:]
June 16th, 2010 at 11:49 am
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June 16th, 2010 at 6:05 pm
Love is a beautiful thing…Ordinary love is even more beautiful for you expect nothing more than ordinary. Nice one…Congrats on your award as well. Cheers.
June 17th, 2010 at 4:29 am
Life is beautiful, because of that thing called love. Cheers.
June 16th, 2010 at 7:04 pm
truely a wonderful love poem – from your heart…..bkm
June 17th, 2010 at 4:29 am
thanks.
June 16th, 2010 at 9:36 pm
great writing- tq for sharing!
June 17th, 2010 at 4:32 am
thank you
June 16th, 2010 at 10:33 pm
What a sweet sentiment. I love your gentle ordinary love. You gave my heart much-needed smiles.
June 17th, 2010 at 4:33 am
Im glad i made you smile. thank you:]
June 17th, 2010 at 1:10 am
there is a reason why you were given a PERFECT POET AWARD!!!
Excellent writing! 😀 Great job! 😀
my link :
http://writtenverse.blogspot.com/
http://harshikaram.wordpress.com/
June 17th, 2010 at 8:29 am
Lovely, every day love is the best you, what a blessing.
June 17th, 2010 at 4:22 pm
thanks, i’m glad i could be a blessing:]
June 17th, 2010 at 10:30 am
this def doesnt look ordinary love to me 🙂
its awesome 😀
m here from Jingle’s Rally
you can read my poetry at
June 17th, 2010 at 10:55 am
Lovely poem! I enjoyed it very much.
June 17th, 2010 at 4:12 pm
thanks. i liked you poem “fade to black” :]
June 17th, 2010 at 2:50 pm
Her smile is what I am dreaming of
That smile…
this piece makes all the girls want to be in love with you
June 17th, 2010 at 3:36 pm
aww thanks. But i not looking for all the girls to love me. just one special ordinary girl…
June 17th, 2010 at 4:31 pm
sweet. simple. beautifully ordinary:)
June 17th, 2010 at 4:38 pm
Thanks for posting this one. awesome. wow!
June 17th, 2010 at 5:45 pm
Wow. Love your blog. Will definitely return to see what else you have to say. Thanks for visiting mine.
June 17th, 2010 at 7:16 pm
i do like that ordinary kinda love…nicely done…my wife is away right now with my boys so i look forward to her return as well…
June 17th, 2010 at 7:24 pm
yes
June 17th, 2010 at 8:40 pm
Ordinary love is the most special kind of love…lasting and true. Well said. Heartspell
June 17th, 2010 at 8:40 pm
just lovely– it’s the stuff I miss post-divorce.
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
June 18th, 2010 at 3:34 am
C’est Magnifique! Ecstasy of seeing love in the mundane — the ordinary becomes extraordinary and in walks then Divine.
Joanny
June 18th, 2010 at 3:37 am
C’est Magnifique! Ecstasy of seeing love in the mundane — the ordinary becomes extraordinary and in walks the Divine.
Joanny
June 18th, 2010 at 5:16 am
Awesome flow of feeling! Loved it all through. Thanks for visiting my blog.
June 18th, 2010 at 6:31 am
Please return favors to poets who were here,
Thank you in advance…
everyone needs encouragement…
Happy Friday!
😉
I have sent this to every poet in my list.
June 18th, 2010 at 2:29 pm
Breathtaking! I love how the simplicity of the form mirrors the subject matter (“ordinary” love) with little nuggets of imagery that surprise and delight!
June 19th, 2010 at 10:02 pm
Congrats on the award, well deserved
June 24th, 2010 at 6:39 pm
Lovely poem, mixing the ordinary and the divine. The best poetry seems to come out of contradictions.
June 24th, 2010 at 9:07 pm
ah, poetry is defined by paradox. :]