Are some hearts
Beyond repair broken?
To never let another in again,
To let the love
Fade into a cold hand,
And the friendship
With the evening half light?
-js
Are some hearts
Beyond repair broken?
To never let another in again,
To let the love
Fade into a cold hand,
And the friendship
With the evening half light?
-js
June 8th, 2010 at 4:07 pm
some hearts
not beyond repair
broken never
let another in
again
to begin
again
without despair
June 9th, 2010 at 7:10 pm
Some hearts are broken beyond repair. They will never allow another tare. Never again will they hold love in their hand. In its place half hearted friendship will stand. -Joe’s Brother
June 10th, 2010 at 2:27 am
Does it always have to be this way?
and why can’t love be free
enough to stay?
Brother, i am just
praying to be relieved of this jest,
and one day know
if this guarded friendship,
is set like a sinking ship,
that will find the sea bottom in eternal rest,
and i could move on
I could move on
a few more hours
it will be dawn….
June 10th, 2010 at 9:50 am
excellent questions,
it leaves readers to think and wonder…
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June 10th, 2010 at 10:34 am
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June 12th, 2010 at 10:35 am
hi Joe, some deep pondering in a style i like..hope all good with you..cheers
Pete
June 12th, 2010 at 12:50 pm
thanks Pete for the kind words. cheers!
Joe
June 12th, 2010 at 8:04 pm
As simple and clear as a broken heart– well written my friend!
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July 20th, 2010 at 3:15 am
sometimes the heart takes a lot of time to heal but ti does at some point of life… nicely put
July 25th, 2010 at 2:49 pm
three poetry awards,
plus two general awards,
enjoy!
thanks for the contribution!
😉